Your articles has a nice layout and it is neat and tidy but your writing for an article on the internet it should be one page that flows downwards but i especially like the fact that you added some advertisement on it
Rohan, this is a well written piece and you have gathered together some strong and relevant research, as well as including your own valuable ideas. You have good journalistic skills. The layout is mainly good although I do not like the grid lines in the export. However you have used sub heads, headings and pictures appropriately, with some attention to detail such as the social network icons. A good attempt at Desk Top Publishing. Vanessa
Your articles has a nice layout and it is neat and tidy but your writing for an article on the internet it should be one page that flows downwards but i especially like the fact that you added some advertisement on it
ReplyDeleteRohan, this is a well written piece and you have gathered together some strong and relevant research, as well as including your own valuable ideas. You have good journalistic skills. The layout is mainly good although I do not like the grid lines in the export. However you have used sub heads, headings and pictures appropriately, with some attention to detail such as the social network icons. A good attempt at Desk Top Publishing. Vanessa
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