A really good read. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in the text and it could be split into columns so it does not put off readers..The pull quote could be larger.
Firstly, the first thing I realise is the image. The image is on a DPS but its being cut out and this makes the first page of the DPS look unorganised, not professional. Rearrange this to make it more professional. I think your font is more of a jazz font or indie font. Maybe something more bold would help to show the genre of the music more clearly. Additionally, there is a lack in colour scheme, you have only used monochrome colours. Use colour which can suit with the artist's attire. You have not include typical mag features and the image lacks quality. Despite this, the image shows what the artist is about. You have included journalism.
A really good read. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in the text and it could be split into columns so it does not put off readers..The pull quote could be larger.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, the first thing I realise is the image. The image is on a DPS but its being cut out and this makes the first page of the DPS look unorganised, not professional. Rearrange this to make it more professional. I think your font is more of a jazz font or indie font. Maybe something more bold would help to show the genre of the music more clearly. Additionally, there is a lack in colour scheme, you have only used monochrome colours. Use colour which can suit with the artist's attire. You have not include typical mag features and the image lacks quality. Despite this, the image shows what the artist is about. You have included journalism.
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